Blog Bootcamp

My Blog comments for the day

Blog Bootcamp

This is now my 3rd comment that I made. I made this on Halatoa's poster.

Blog Bootcamp

This is my 2nd comment that I have made.

Blog Bootcamp

This is my first comments. I made this comment on mia and jasman.

Xtra Math

Today I did xtra maths. I Got 4 wrong and 19 right. What I need to work on is the tile that is green. 

Revising Sentences

Today I have been learning about the word DRAFT. DRAFT is like an acrostic poem. Each letter of this word means something in writing. Today we have been focusing on the D.D stands for Delete. In class Miss Paton shared with us a pieces of writing which we had to delete, take out words and change sentences. Here in my piece  of writing.

Miss Paton’s copy

Miss Paton has a cat. His name is Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain in the neck. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin. He always come to my house wanting food. Oscar likes to fall asleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop computer. He would rather sit on my lap. Oscar would like me to give him the attention.

68 words

My copy

Miss Paton has a cat named Oscar. He is a tabby cat. Oscar can be a pain. He likes to sniff my rubbish bin most of the day. He always come to my house feeling disappointed. Oscar likes to sleep on my couch. He does not like my laptop. He’d would sit on my lap. He would sit on my lap and get the attention.

65 words

My Lunch Colours

 This was my lunch. My lunch was not healthy. I had to put my unhealthy lunch in the box that say's Fat,Salt and Sugar. I got my lunch on last Thursday. On last Thursday for lunch I had a cookie and a roll up that was not healthy for me. next time when I get lunch I would ask for a healthy lunch instead of sweets.