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Friday, 30 October 2015

My Recount Scraffold


Beginning - this includes your hook. Start your recount with an exciting beginning that captures your audience interest levels
YES! I went to Hunters Plaza. I was really excited going to Hunters Plaza. I went with my aunty and my sisters.




Ensure your recount covers the orientation: When, Where, Who, What, Why and How

Set your recount out in a clear logical order and in paragraphs

Write in the past tense

Use lots of adjectives - (describing words) personal thoughts and feelings

Language Features such as similes, metaphors, onomatopoeia

Use connectives
When we got to Hunters Plaza
the first thing I did was that I went to Kmart and bought some clothes for my cousin.Then next we went to go to the food court to eat. Me and My sisters had Mcdonalds. I also had some of my sisters nuggets that were golden inside like the potatoes how they are golden.  What I had from Mcdonald's was a crispy chicken wrap with aioli sauce, Salad, and some tomatoes it was delicious.  
Next we went to the fish ‘n’ chips shop to buy my mum some food. Then I went to drop my mum some food off. After that we went to my dad’s training.Me and my brother stayed at the tranning with my dad. We went to the Park. The first thing we did was that we went to the swings. Then we went to the sand pit and build a volcano with water inside it, it was awesome. Then me and my brother went to have a race on the spiderman web. I was the first one to touch the top and get down first.
Conclusion
Sums up how you felt about the experience.




After we came down I felt happy because I got to play with my brother and have fun. I was really happy that my brother came with me. I felt really happy.
Today I have made a recount scaffold about what I did in the holidays. This. is my recount and I have finished it today.

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